jessicaoakes

Framing The World Through My Photographs

Writing my paper

I have never found writing easy, before this module I had only written one academic essay, so I still felt like a novice to writing an essay. Coming from a  BTEC background I hadn’t experienced writing in this way.

Foolishly I kept putting of my writing as I felt I didn’t know where to begin. I kept going to APT with the statement i’m struggling. I found myself with all my research and not knowing how to start. As I wasn’t sure how to start I decided to gather points of my research and formulate paragraphs about each point hoping it would help to get me started.

I will upload images of my drafts below.

Draft one

Draft one

Draft one

Draft one

Draft two

After writing small paragraphs in my first draft I felt more confident in starting tho write.

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Draft three

I took this into an apt to gain some feedback to see if how I was writing was okay . The feedback I got was that my introduction has covered way to much and would loose interest.

draft 3

draft 3

draft 3

draft 3

Draft 4

After my feedback I decided to re write and start again. And make the changes I was made aware about.

draft 4

draft 4

draft 4

draft 4

Draft 5

I felt myself getting slightly more confident over my writing, and felt I had made a really good start.

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Draft six

After showing this draft, I came away feeling good about myself as anthony had noticed a massive step up between the last time her saw my work , which made me feel very proud.

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Draft 7

After my last draft I would only need to make small changed to sentence structure , wording and grammar

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8th draft

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Draft 9

Its was suggested to me that I should include some visual anaylis of both photographers I have researched

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Final draft – I have made all the necessery changes to my draft and I am feeling pleased with it.

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After writing this all that is left to do is rehearse it. I feel incredibly proud of myself for writting this. After so many break downs over not feeling that I is good enough, i am please at what i have achieved . I wanted to keep the language i used fairly simple for two reasons one I have to be able to present the paper and the other i feel my topic is very relatable to everyone therefor I didn’t want to loose them in complicated language.

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This entry was posted on February 22, 2015 by in 350MC - photography in context.
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